Friday, 24 August 2012

Pike's Quest Review - KJ Bennet (Fantasy)

I was very excited aboout reading Pike's Quest because I'd read positive reviews about it, and followed the blog of the author, KJ Bennet. The blog is extremely well written and holds many excellent pieces of advice which a young writer could only expect to obtain after years trying to break into the business. I knew the writing would be great, but I have to be honest and say I was not a fan of the novel.

Firstly I have to be honest and say that I only managed to get through the first half of the book, I couldn't push myself any further, so if the book changed miraculously in the second half then I wouldn't know.

The main things I disliked about this novel were the pace and the characters. The pace is strange. The first big event of Pike meeting Morlock happens instantly, so we have no time to get our bearings of the surroundings or even the characters. In Fantasy the hero's quest is always larger than life and have deverstating consequences. The journey pushes the hero so much and challenges them and so it is vital that the reader is interested and cares for the hero, otherwise why would we want to dedicate weeks of our lives to reading about them. So the problem with Pike's quest starting so quickly is that the world hasn't been established, which leaves us confused, and we don't yet know Pike. After this first event the action is incredibly slow and I found it quite boring. It seems completely irrelevant to the rest of the story, as it's just Pike being explained, at a snail's pace, what he's supposed to do on his quest, as well as meeting some characters. The character's are not developed and not rounded in the slightest. In faireness to the writer, I think he has intended this novel to be more about the jokes and not the characters, but I personally found the lack of characterisation to be the reason I didn't want to read on. I think my idea of funny is also very different from the writer's.

On a positive note the writing itself was of a high standard. It was easy to read and description was particularly well done. Also the premise of the story is unique and interesting, but I just don't think it was executed strongly.

I won't recommend this to anyone I know, but from reading the other reviews on Amazon, it is clear that those people enjoyed it.

This story is like marmite, you will either love it or hate it.

2/5

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